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【原创】24班记忆 ---- 6 续龙的敬师大作  

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【原创】欢迎你们,插班生! - 灵飞 - 灵飞家园 知识花妍

       24班毕业前,我破例给学生们留了一次作业:用英语写点什么,最好是有关我们英语学习。题目自拟,篇幅随便,时间不定。

      6人中只有孙冰龙至今没见反馈,其余4人写了英语,一人只写封语言短信。其他4人都写得简单,最多不过160词。只有战续龙竟然洋洋洒洒写了这么多!恐怕至少上千词!尽管语法问题很多,但他大胆使用词汇,不仅展示了较好的英语应用水平,也表现了积极活跃的思维、较高的情商!实在令人刮目相看!!于是我另作一篇,专门展示他的作文。他不仅发来电子英文稿,也同时发来汉语译文。还有赠与学弟学妹们的名言警句!可见其用心之深,用意之重!!

 上照是刚来时的小战,胖乎乎的多萌啊!!那时就很自信! 

【原创】24班记忆 ---- 5  续龙的敬师大作 - 灵飞 - 灵飞家园 知识花妍

     2013年续龙在25班里,左下角是他!

   下边就是他的英文信:(问题多,很难懂!待我修改指正后另出一篇吧)

To my the greatest English teacher __________Mrs.Liu

       You are a knowledgable teacher  and you are a powerful teacher in English.    It is thank to your help that I can change my English level and   make it to be a new  advantagement.  Not noly I could be stable in high school English class but also I could direct know about the truth from the foreign heart and a non-politicing history of world civilzations. And now I just want to say thank to you from my heart!

   I never take important in English and I dislike that English teacher when I was a pupil.And I threw the English homework every at the beginning of the term, admired the view of school through the window in English class. My mother tried her best to take me to a after-school English class for many times and all of trying is defeat ---it was  actually easy in primary school.

       But it changed when I get into the junior high school. I just fell nervous when I face my class-English teacher  that he looks like a puma.I just only didnt get a great grades at first but my mother thinks it a bad thing because she just wanted me to get into NO.1 senior high school.But there were too many  bad after-school English class interfere her choice. This situation didnt change until ZhaiYuJia come my shop to buy sth. When she knows the problem of my mother,she tried her best to introduce  your English class. A sentence I could never forget from that half a hour-great lecture is that : I just meet the god when you meet the Mrs.Liu (And it is acaully correct by truth). Half an hour later my mother will no longer control me all forms of opposition, insisted that I go to your class, I was too lazy to die, but the mother is difficult to violate, had to try.

I  never be afraid of difficult conditions for learning, but when I saw so many new words, I really whispered sprayed a dirty sentence: "what 's the fuck?"I fell very messy at the first class. Even though I was warned . On halfway really listen to not bottom go to, so he find an excuse to bugger, but I had make a decision to come here to learn more, after returning I reported directly on the 25,26 two classes.

Just on the several day everyone is my amazing memory impressed so that 26 classes of some parents to ask how I remember, but I really want to say that my IQ is not high, really only 100 , and my schoolmates is closed to 130, 140, I was only just listen to the class carefully , my home is always too lazy to recite the, I never imagine anyone as clever, I just saw something than the people around me much.

Learn to learn I found a number of problems, is the mode  here and the school is not a small difference between the. Other classes, other schools I do not know, but on our class teacher, he tried to tell us more about the use of vocabulary, but had no choice but to pull back to the text grammar. This is the problem of the Chinese system, teachers themselves have no way but may is our school teacher taught so, we the fourth English to sit every year in the first three. Then I will refute your point of view is: "China's English education is just practicing grammar." Our head teacher is a hundred times tells us: “ Researching staff has begun to reform, to the lexical to enter the senior high school entrance examination." This is the reality.

Here I want to say some truth, with increasing grade, more and more complex and the older generation of strange things into the minds of all the students and share the thinking space for the few that in school are not ease study. However, your lesson is the need to pay a great  attention  to barely digest the knowledge. Then I found the a universal law, is the class of all lectures efficiency in the third period (including students) have varying degrees of decline, when entering the ninth grade efficiency will decline more powerful, in the latter part of the efficiency of the lecture probably do not like high efficiency of the steam engine. (here I have to point out that the fly does not bite the egg, XiaoShi lectures efficiency decline I do not pay the main responsibility, because he also began to understand some of the things you do not understand the generation. But why do we still want to go on in class 24? Because all students are thin skinned, everybody dare not put forward because of the sensibilities of node class, and thick skinned had not learned. You will see I often puts to rest, end the class, but I must declare that I am a made a fallguy, this is the intention of the class, just because I am finally more thick skinned people. Combination of what Liang Xidan examples that you can understand the, but I also hope you can accept this fact. I don't want you hammer and tongs taught us so many years but on the final stage still kept in the dark. But this really does not have any relation with your teaching method, this is only a general rule.

     In the end, I really thank you for teaching me so much to be meaningful, valuable things, you really like the God of my life to change the fate of English. One of the elders asked me what is the purpose of learning English, my answer is: "I am trying to learn English is to let my future generations never learn English." I believe that you give me a great help in my dream, I will try to do, let you not only just help me and those you have taught the students.

Thank you all helped me, I wish you good health and a long life!

   致敬我们最伟大的英语老师————Mrs Liu

 您是我见过最见多识广的老师,也是英语方面最强大的老师,您在对我们教学方面的成就所有人有目共睹,我也是多亏了从您这里学了如此长的时间在能把英语化劣势为优势,不仅能在学校站稳脚跟,更能直观的去了解外国人的真实想法与更深层次的了解不加政治伪装的世界文明,在此,我要向您表示由衷的感谢!

  上小学的时候,我从来不重视英语,也不喜欢那个英语老师,以至于刚发的练习册乱丢,上课把脑袋伸出窗外去看风景,在课桌下做小动作。我妈试图让我去上几个英语补习班,但都被我七躲八闪的敷衍过去——小学英语的确不难。

   但上了初中以后,首先面对着一个长得像美洲豹英语班主任,我就感到非常的紧张,刚上来英语也不愠不火(初一英语能难到哪去),但我妈并非这么想,她希望我能考上油田一中,所以固然希望我在传统优势的文科打出统治力来,但外面各种效率不好的英语班也让她疑虑重重,直到后来有一天翟羽佳来我家店买东西。当她知道了我妈的疑虑时,她就开始全力推荐您的英语班,她说了半个小时的重大演讲中,有一句话让我终生难忘:“当你见到了刘老师,你就相当于见到了上帝。”(后来事实证明这句话是正确的)。半小时后我妈就不再管我一切形式的反对,执意让我去您那上课,我是个懒得要死的人,但母命难违,只好去试试。

 我从不畏惧艰难的学习条件,但当我见到那么多的生词时,我真小声的喷了一句:Whats the fuck ?”去您那的第一节课时凌乱的尽管我被打过了预防针。上到半道真的听不下去了,于是就自己找了个借口开溜了,但我当时已经下定决心要来这里学习了,回去后就直接报上了25,26两个班。

   刚上了几节大家就被我惊艳的记性折服了以至于26班的某些家长都来问我怎么记的,但我真的要澄清我的智商真的不高,真的只有100出头,和我同学中那些高达130,140的完全没法比,我当时只是在上课认真听讲而已,我回家从来是懒得背的,我从来没有任何人想象的那么聪明,我只是见过的东西比我周围的人多罢了。

学着学着我就发现了一些问题,就是这里的体制与学校是有不小的区别的。别的班级,别的学校我不知道,但就论我们的班主任而言,他极力想多给我们讲词汇的用法,但又不得不无奈的扯回到课文语法上去。这是中国体制的问题,老师本身也没有办法,但可能就是我们学校的老师这么教,我们四中英语才年年坐稳前三。这时我就要反驳您的一项观点就是:“中国的英语教育只是在练语法。”我们班主任也上百次的告诉我们:“教研员已经开始进行改革,要把词汇活用进军中考。”这就是现实。

最后我真的感谢您教会了我这么多有意义,有价值的东西,您确实如上帝般改变了我这辈子英语的命运。曾经有个长辈问我你学英语的目的是什么,我的回答是:“我努力学英语是为了让我的后代永远不用再学英语。”我相信您在我的梦想上给我一记极大的帮助,我要努力去做,让您不只是帮了我和那些您教过的学生。

感谢您曾经帮助我的的一切,祝您身体健康,万寿无疆!

  

致给您和学弟学妹们几句我总结的话和我的座右铭 

一个人生在一个时代,就要默默忍受这个时代所给予我们全部的痛苦,每一个时代都有黑暗的一面,我们应该庆幸活在这个相对和平的时代,所有怨天忧人的人都是该被社会淘汰的渣子。 

一个民族在无尽黑暗中挣扎而起,成为世界主宰,但在万丈光明中堕落,坠入万丈深渊,光明永远制造瞎子,且光明的源头就是黑暗之地。 

和平?只不过是统治者的谎言和这个时代的白日梦。一个追求和平的民族早晚要被时间所淘汰和绞杀。 

要么敌人踩着我们的尸体过去,要么我们踏着敌人的尸体前进,这个时代在召唤,我们,正在被幸运女神垂青。                              

                               ————阿道夫·希特勒 

重大的政治决定不是通过演讲和多数派举手投票来决定的,而要由铁和血来决策!

                          ————铁血宰相俾斯麦 

我们的教育把死亡说成非常恐怖的事情,但如今我发现并不是这样,死亡是很直白并比其他知识更容易掌握的,这并不是说我试图去死,我只是现在已经对死亡无所畏惧 

                                ————乔治·巴顿  

有志者,事竟成,破釜沉舟,百二秦关终属楚。 

苦心人,天不负,卧薪尝胆,三千越甲可吞吴。

                                     ————无名氏  

  他发来文稿后,我立刻用英文回复如下:              Thank for the long English article! Yet, It's so vague that I can only understand about half of it after reading it.  I admire your passion and courage!  I'm quite moved  you've used such wonderful words describing me. Thank you for the deep love!   However, you've made quite a few errors in your writing, including grammer in sentences and spelling of words. I still can make out your old inattentive habit through your writing.  Bad habit will spoil your life in some day. So please get rid of it as soon as possible. I'll spend some time correcting your writing.  wait, please.   

可译作:
    谢谢写来这么长的英文信,但是表达很模糊,读后我只能明白大概一半。我赞赏你的激情与信心!你用那么美妙的词来描绘我,真令我感动!谢谢你这深深的爱!
     然而,你在写作中犯了很多错误,包括句子的语法和词的误拼。从这写作中我还能看到你那粗心毛躁的习惯。没准哪天坏习惯会损毁你的生活,所以请尽快地改掉它,好吗?我得花点时间修改一下你的写作。请等等啊。

【原创】24班记忆 ---- 5  续龙的敬师大作 - 灵飞 - 灵飞家园 知识花妍
  上照左边躺着的,下照后排打手势的是小战在25班里的形象。
【原创】24班记忆 ---- 5  续龙的敬师大作 - 灵飞 - 灵飞家园 知识花妍

 下边24班合影中有战续龙的的形象,您自己能辨认出吧?
【原创】24班记忆 ---- 5  续龙的敬师大作 - 灵飞 - 灵飞家园 知识花妍 
【原创】24班记忆 ---- 5  续龙的敬师大作 - 灵飞 - 灵飞家园 知识花妍 
【原创】24班记忆 ---- 5  续龙的敬师大作 - 灵飞 - 灵飞家园 知识花妍 
【原创】24班记忆 ---- 5  续龙的敬师大作 - 灵飞 - 灵飞家园 知识花妍
 孩子们长得快啊。他也瘦了,高了,大了!
 我期待他尽快沉稳下来,早脱浮躁恶习,更专注于求知,获得更快提升!
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